Thursday, April 21, 2016

My response to Prompt #1702 Slave Country

This is an except from an early draft of a novel in progress. The working title is Intervals. It's the story of a man with a temporal gift and his family. The story begins in Africa in 1510. This excerpt is from page 43 of currently 250 unformatted pages

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“Get them down in this hold! Now!” The angry shouted command from the slave driver echoed up from within the cavernous slave compartment below decks.
The rough wooden flooring was littered with shackles mounted to the planks with oversized screws. As the African’s were partially lowered, partially dropped into the hold, a slaver would immediately manhandle them into position and clamp the shackle down on the ankle of the slave. Once filled, the hold might contain well over one hundred slaves, each existing in a space of six square feet—or less.
Nadira’s descendants were as fortunate as the newly captured Africans could be. Most of the direct family was locked into the hold of the same ship. In spite of the maltreatment on the trip from their tribal home to the coast, nearly all of the surviving members of the tribe were in reasonable physical shape.
Jabari [brave, fearless], King Chatha’s oldest son, stared grimly straight ahead. He had no idea what the strange sounds from the white-skinned ones meant. But, through tone and whip, he had learned do follow the men’s gestures or face harsh repercussions.
Now he stood at the edge of the opening to the slave compartment. He knew he was about to be beaten, but he also knew what he had to do. Two insignificant-looking branches were clasped tightly to his chest. He’d nearly lost consciousness twice while being forced along the forest pathway for not relinquishing the talisman. But, he’d memorized the stories of how his ancestor’s used their mental abilities to gain and maintain their dominance. He would die defending the artifacts.
“Jump down!” a slaver screamed as he prodded Jabari with a rod. When the young man didn’t move, the slaver moved behind him and shoved him over the lip of the hatch.
Jabari crashed to the deck of the compartment with a resounding crack. A scream of agony filled the space below deck as one of the branches pushed up through his armpit, shattering his scapula, and dislocating his shoulder. Surprisingly, there was a relatively small amount of blood—the wood miraculously missing the axillary artery and the brachial and cephalic veins.
Two sailors assigned to the task of escorting recalcitrant prisoners to their assigned shackle moved to Jabari. One hoisted him to his feet—the branch still protruding from both the top of his shoulder and his armpit. The other retrieved the remaining branch. As the second sailor prepared to toss his branch into a distant corner, the scream of a female flew across the distance between her position and the second sailor where it embedded itself in eardrum.
“No!”
The sailor, unaccustomed to hearing any non-African words from the slaves, stopped his arm in mid-swing. He slowly turned to see which of the wenches had the audacity to interrupt his actions. It took very little time for his gaze to lock on to the perpetrator.
The defiant eyes of Chipo [gift], Jabari’s youngest sister, met the sailor’s gaze—and her intensity overwhelmed his intent. He dropped his eyes. Her hand stabbed outward towards the man. Instinctively, he offered her the branch.
The sailor supporting Jabari’s sagging frame took in the entire episode—but did nothing to intervene. There was something about this slightly built slave, shackled to the floor—that caused his heart to race as adrenaline diffused into his arteries and stimulated his fight or flight response.
“That’s enough time with this pair,” the first sailor announced as he shoved Jabari towards his partner. “Shackle this one next to his girlfriend!”
When the hold was overfull of slaves, the single hatch slammed shut. Only small, weak beams of waning sunlight filtered through some shrunken decking. For all intents and purposes, the mass of humanity was isolated in total darkness.
The ship cast off. As it left the shallow harbor and entered the open Atlantic, the boat began to rise a fall and sway side to side. Almost the entire slave population—none of whom had ever been in a boat of any kind—discovered seasickness simultaneously.
By morning, the floor reeked with the combine odor of vomit, urine, and fecal matter. And that was just the beginning of day one. Depending on the winds, the last day at sea might be anywhere from 30-60 days hence.
Jabari lay on his good side. During the night—working completely by touch in the pitch-blackness—the two men closest to him hand combine to remove the branch from its scabbard of flesh and bone. Chipo had collected Jabai’s impaler and slept her fitful sleep with them crossed over her abdomen. She awakened with a throbbing headache and memory of a vision of white-skinned men plotting to remove Jabari and toss him into the sea at the first hint of fever.
Since, between the ship’s rolling and pitching and the pain in her head, sitting up was unbearable, Chipo lay back down. Unconsciously, she rubbed the fingers of her right hand along the thumb of her left—ever conscious of the malformation of that digit that found its tip angled toward her left index finger.
Two days later, the two sailors who’d secured Jabari upon arrival waded through the cacophony of human noise and waste. They unshackled the King’s Son, and dragged him to a spot below the hatch—sparing not the rod on any who protested beyond vocalization at their actions.
Chipo sat paralyzed. These men were the men who’d been discussing Jabari in her dream. They were doing exactly what she’d heard them say they would do! She tried to stop the men, but her vocalization fell, unheard, among the crowd of slaves that surrounded her. She vowed never to allow something evil she dreamed would occur to happen—at least not without her best effort to thwart that evil.
Tears eroded pathways through the accumulated dirt on her face as she watched Jabari, too weak to struggle, be held erect. At a command from one of the sailors, a rope dropped into the semi-darkness. Once it was secure around Jabari’s chest, those on the upper deck hoisted his limp, feverish frame into the sunlight. Seconds later, the muffled sound of a splash was heard.

Jabari’s suffering had ended.

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