Monday, March 30, 2020

#amwriting Idea Farming—growing your plot #4—The Backyard Garden (Part II)



This is the fourth blog on story farming. In this one, the focus is—The Backyard Garden (novella-length pieces).

A good backyard garden might have different areas of plantings—like an anthology. But it might also have a focus that must be a single unit to be properly appreciated—like a fruit tree… or a novella.

The anthology approach to a back yard garden is like a buffet with stations. Each planted area makes a statement on its own. You might have roses, ground cover, annual color, and a perennial shrub border. Then again, you might have none of that—and still have a very nice backyard garden.

The novella approach to a back yard garden is like a meeting where lunch is catered and consists of ONLY one specific portion for each guest. No matter where you look, it’s evident that this backyard is a rose garden, a vegetable garden, or whatever the focus is.

ANTHOLOGIES used to be common forms of book publication. At one time, I had shelves of them in my collection.



But, the last post focused on short stories.

NOVELLA is defined by Merriam-Webster as: 

(1) a story with a compact and pointed plot; or 
(2) a work of fiction intermediate in length and complexity between a short story and a novel. 

Whether you choose the first or second definition, the process of growing a novella is similar. 

In definition (1), the plot itself is emphasized. In definition (2), the length is the focus. Some definitions of novella include the idea of “morality tale” in them. 

In general, novellas are more commonly associated with the novel than the short story. However, in some anthologies, novellas are included—generally in a segregated section of the book.

According to Writer’s Digest, “Novellas generally run 20,000-50,000 words.” 

Reverse Image, volume 3 in the Traveler’s HOT L series is almost 28,000 words. It is a novella in every respect as described in this blog.

If you have a point you are trying to make, I recommend the short story over the novella. Writing shorter forces you to FOCUS on where you’re going. If you ramble in a novella, it’s a lot like wandering through a back yard that’s just had plants stuck in where there is space. Over time, or pages in a novella, the garden gets so overgrown that finding any specific plant, or idea in a novella, is nearly impossible. When any plot becomes so convoluted or obscure that your reader can’t follow it, they will stop reading.

I close with the most important lessons in writing for the backyard garden. 

1.    Prune the plants. Edit judiciously. Remember the goal is completeness, not length.

2.   Keep it weed-free. Edit judiciously. Remember the focus of your story.

3.   Fertilize when needed. Edit judiciously. Remember to flesh out plot points as needed to move the story forward.

4.   Remove dead or dying plants. Edit judiciously. Remember that even the best plot point in the wrong story is an impediment.

Next blog: Idea Farming—growing your plot #5—The South Forty – The Novel

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Monday, March 23, 2020

#amwriting Idea Farming—growing your plot #3—The Backyard Garden - Anthologies



This is the third of six blogs on story farming. In this one, The Backyard Garden (anthologies and/or novella-length pieces) is the topic.

Herbaceous plants are most common as seasonal color and are heavily represented in color pots and hanging containers. They have a short life—usually one or two years. Their purpose is to project a specific feel in a very defined space. They never get very tall because their stems cannot add additional “wood” to their stems as they grow. Think petunias and green beans.

Woody stems are associated with perennial plants—those that live over two years. These plants do have wood-producing cells in their interiors and are capable, in some species, of growing to considerable height and circumference. Think rose bushes and oak trees.
Herbaceous plants are the short stories of the botanical world. Not from the life span, but because they are limited in size. As a writer of short stories, you learn to “stop when the story is done.” Overwriting in a short story causes the entire plant/story to suffer and ultimately collapse under its own weight.

Some plants present an illusion of herbaceousness. Bonsai specimens are woody plants that have been carefully and judiciously pruned over an extended time to present a miniature version of the plant. This type of short story is ripe for converting into a full-sized version of itself—expanding a short story into a longer piece.

Traveler’s HOT L – The Time Traveler’s Resort is filled with examples of short stories, all around or significantly less than 5000 words long, that were bonsai versions of longer stories. Combining the increased length with a common theme, in HOT L it's time travel, provides a perfect storm of stories in the anthology.

I invite you to investigate Sir Isaac's Car, another example of a themed anthology.


WARNING!
Not all short stories are bonsai. The vast majority of short stories are herbaceous plants. If you try to expand a short story that lacks the woody tissue needed to support the added verbiage, your story will never be what you want it to be, or even what it was before you bloated it.

When you finish writing a short story, put it aside. Ask two or three people to be beta readers of the story. Carefully consider the feedback from the beta readers. If there are any commonalities like “you jumped from A to B without explanation, or “where did character X come from,” or “what happened to character X,” suggests you might need to expand the length of the story. 

Try this.
Think of a story idea for a short story.
Write an outline or a plotline.
Write a short story no longer than 500 words
You'll find it's easier to write long than short!

 This post does not discuss novellas. More on that next week.

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Monday, March 16, 2020

#amwriting #authors Idea Farming—growing your plot #2—Container Gardening


In this post, the second blog on story farming, the focus is Container Gardening (short stories). To review, here's the complete list of story gardens.



  • Container (short stories)
  • Backyard (anthologies and/or novella-length pieces)
  • The South 40 (the novel)
  • Mega Farming (the book series).


  • Given a choice, I’d write almost exclusively short stories. Something is satisfying in planting and growing a tale in just a few hundred to a few thousand-word container, analogous to a pot or raised bed garden, as opposed to tens of thousands of words in gardens of larger size.

    Once you choose a seed, it’s imperative to prepare the soil. Even when writing a short story, having an end in mind when you begin a story is critical. Remember that the harvest from your container is a short story, complete with a planned ending.

    Start with a premiseIf you don’t know what your end product will be when you write, how will know when your finished?

    Consider your target length. Most short-story competitions have word count limits. Three thousand words is a common limit. Aiming for a specific numerical goal is good practice in the discipline of writing without the fluff.

    Minimally, the cultivation of container gardens involves 
    • a rough outline, 
    • character sketches, 
    • some plans for what your characters will discuss in dialog format. 


    Determine the pecking order among characters before you begin or you'll find yourself re-writing to correct contradictory actions and dialog.

    "Sir Isaac's Car" is a short story anthology of mine. It is a series of stories, all between 1500 and 5000 words in length. I recommend it as for examples of different ways to explore the same characters. The stories are written in the first-person perspective, something that sounds easy, but isn't. More on that in a later blog.

    Anthology publications:
    "What goes around" (9735 words) in 

    A World Unimagined: An Anthology of Science and Speculative Fiction exploding the boundaries of your imagination.


    "Drop by Drop" (4580 words) in
    If you have never written a short story, or only written a few, I encourage you to take the time to grow one soon. You’ll find out that writing shorter is more challenging in many regards than writing longer. 

    But, it’s excellent practice in honing your storytelling skill.

    Next week: Idea Farming—growing your plot #3—The Backyard Garden


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    Monday, March 9, 2020

    #amwriting #authors Idea Farming: Growing Your Plot #1


    This is the second blog on story farming. This one describes the required components for a healthy plot harvest. Future posts describe farming methods.
    • Container (short stories)
    • Backyard (anthologies and/or novella-length pieces)
    • The South 40 (the novel)
    • Mega Farming (the book series).

    The last blog is a pro/con commentary on each method with advice on when it’s appropriate to use ideas from each in a type of farming for effective cross-pollination. 
    Because you want a good crop/plot, we start with basic needs.

    Soil
    While it is possible to produce sizable crops with hydroponics, most plants are grown in soil. 
    • Dirt is not soil. 
    • Soil contains an abundance of organic and inorganic materials that help nourish the plant and keep the roots anchored.

    In your plot garden, the soil is your experience as a reader and writer. 
    In the same way that plants grow best in rich soil, without a good grasp of what it takes to make a good story, you’re pretty much doomed as a writer.
    Seed.
    A mature seed contains an embryo plant that’s waiting for the right conditions to grow into a plant.
    • Unless the mature idea for your story is present in your plot-seed when you start writing, you’ll find that growing a story is impossible. 

    At the minimum, have a basic outline in writing when you begin.
    “The Law." 
    All plants require Light, Air, and Water (LAW) to grow. 
    • Take away any of these three requirements, you break the law, and your plant dies.
    • Plots also die when requirements aren’t met. 

    You need 
    • believable characters, 
    • reasonable plot points, 
    • realistic dialog 

    to keep your plot-plant alive.
    Cultivation/weeding/pruning.
    Gardeners and farmers know that 
    • keeping the soil loose, 
    • removing weeds, and, if the plant requires it,
    •  judicious removal of shots/limbs that are dying, dead, or growing in the wrong direction

    are mandatory actions to an abundant harvest. 

    You must cultivate the plants in your plot gardens.
    • Keep your mind’s soil loose and open to new and alternate ideas. 
    You must week your plot garden. 
    • Be willing to admit that some of what you’ve written is more weed than crop and remove those post-haste. 

    Some of the verbiage you write is good, but not in the story you’re writing—that’s where pruning comes in. 
    Cutting good stuff to keep your plot growing (MOVING FORWARD) is essential.

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    Monday, March 2, 2020

    #amwriting #authors Idea Farming: Seed Catalogs—where to get ideas for your story



    You have to have an idea before you can farm it into a story. This blog discusses where to find overall ideas for stories.

    There are three sources for ideas that I use with regularity. First, we’ll look at each as an independent entity.

    Catalog #1: Real-life
    Events recorded in history are excellent sources for ideas. They nearly always have a ring of truth to them, and they usually provide key plot points you can incorporate. 

    Betrayal in Blue, now in ARC review and scheduled for a 5/27/2020 release, is an example. A friend, and former police officer, told his story of why he left the police force and became a pastor. Since the idea of transitioning from police officer to pastor intrigued me, and the minimal details he was allowed to provide based on the circumstances of his separation from the force provided significant tension, I thought it was an ideal story idea.

    So I wrote a novella about it.

    After my friend read the manuscript, he returned it saying, “Thank you.”
    “Oh, no,” I replied. “I should be thanking you.”
    “You don’t understand,” he said. “Now I know how the story ends.”

    That’s what a fiction writer dreams to hear.

    When you use material from real-life, and your book is a work of fiction, you must be careful to augment your characters’ names, looks, and actions/situations so that they only resemble the real-life versions. Putting a disclaimer in your front matter is also essential. Below is my disclaimer.

    Betrayal in Blue is a work of fiction. All characters and locations, certain procedures, and the ultimate ending of this story are fictional. With the exception of verified historical events and persons, all incidents, descriptions, dialog, and opinions expressed are the products of the author’s imagination and are not to be construed as real.

    Catalog #2: Published material
    You can’t copyright an idea, so existing stories often provide ideas for new stories. That’s a good thing because there is a limited number of plot situations possible.

    Georges Polti was a 19th-century French writer [who] described 36 situations that may be found in many stories, based on the list identified by Goethe who said it was originated by Italian Carlo Gozzi (1720-1806).” From: http://www.changingminds.org/disciplines/storytelling/plots/polti_situations/polti_situations.htm

    Polti’s list is extensive. It also reads like a list: 
    1. Supplication
    2. Deliverance
    3. Vengeance of a crime
    4. Vengeance taken for kindred upon kindred

    The link after the quote about Polti above takes you to a website that explains each situation.

    When teaching high school biology to mostly seniors, after the Advanced Placement Biology Exam, my AP Bio students wrote a science fiction story. AP Biology was their 3rd or 4th science and they listened to my stories for at least a year.

    To be fair, I also wrote a story while the students were writing one. 

    To even the playing field a bit, since I was writing short stories regularly, I allowed the class to pick three numbers from 1-36. Those were the required plot situations to include in my story. In addition, they got to select two major characters—ranging from students in the class to Sponge Bob and Chuck Norris (in the same story!). Finally, they were allowed the select the science upon which my story was based.

    That is not the best way to mine your story ideas, and many of the stories I wrote were cheesy. However, teachers used two or three of those forced plotline stories to pique interest in a topic for various science classes. The basic outline of one of them is the structure for “DNA Trek,” a story in the original Traveler’s HOT L book.

    Catalog #3: Dreams, etc
    Never discount your brain as a rich source of inspiration. I learned to get out of bed and write down ideas when I wake up in the middle of the night. Sometimes I read skdf solsnof soo s alsno or some such iteration of what I was thinking. But, most often enough of the dream is there to allow me to recall my thoughts and use them. 

    Moral of this story: Keep a pencil and paper on your nightstand!

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