Not Quite Random Thoughts on
Revising What You’ve Written
I have
been writing a long time; since 1st-grade, for sure, in 1956. I
consider myself to be a good writer. Two publishers agree with that assessment
enough to publish books I authored or co-authored. Both asked if my manuscripts
had been professionally edited before I submitted them.
I was in
a quandary. What answer were they looking for?
I
answered truthfully, “no.”
They
seemed to be impressed.
I took
their response to mean I’d done all the editing I need to do.
WRONG!
I have
recently pulled two of my CreateSpace books down while I re-edited. I found
HUNDREDS of typos, etc… in each. I
was embarrassed. And, I vowed it would not happen again.
Therefore,
I have been much more conscientious with what I think is finally edited.
Recently, I have included one of my good friends who enjoys “finding glitches”
when she reads. She now reads all my manuscripts before I do my final edit.
Just last week, Laura Vavz, an outstanding blogger who did a review for The Observers,
posted a blog: 5-Writing
Apps I can’t live without. I read the article. I downloaded one of the Apps
she recommended: Hemingway.
I tried it immediately. I will use it on all my manuscripts
before submitting them.
This software
does NOT edit for you. It does provide color-coded segments of your text with
issues: passive voice, adverbs, difficult reading, very hard to read. It also
provides a Grade Level approximation for your text.
The spelling checker works better in "Write" mode than in "Edit" mode. While that's a bit of a bummer, the benefits far outweigh the negatives in this APP.
The spelling checker works better in "Write" mode than in "Edit" mode. While that's a bit of a bummer, the benefits far outweigh the negatives in this APP.
The screen shot here
is of the first half of a novella I'm working on. The file uploaded for this
screen shot is 10,000 words long.
What this
has done for me is to SLOW ME DOWN. I
have evidence of manuscript issues that are clearly marked. Not changing them—or
at least considering changing them—is very bad authorship on my part.
I am a finisher. While that trait has served me
well in life, it’s not the best trait for an author. Editor is the trait I’m now striving for. Followed of course, by finisher.
Next
blog: Story Telling
VS. Writing A Story
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